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With everyone and no one
I stand alone on earth
with nothing here beside me
I await my own rebirth

The time finally comes
I see majestic gates
on through which I walk
a perfect world awaits

I live here in peace
with all of those around me
we all stand together
below a god who grounds me

Although this world is perfect
I've finaly learned to tell
that beneath this insane ruler
the heaven turns to hell

I live here, immortal
Nothing now can stop me
but I think I've come to realize
the risk is what brought me

I have now learned
that the perfect lifes a bore
I rip apart the wings
I once so happily wore

I fall back down to earth
the angels gather 'round
I think the time has come
to put my feet back on the ground

Now I live to die
life is way too short
I dont follow the rules
of the 'oh-so holy' court

Beaty is more wondrous
the water is now wetter
life is but a dream
that cannot get much better

I dedicated my life
only to pass the test
to get into the heavens
that me is put to rest

They say 'Heaven is perfection'
But I do not concur
I choose the mortal life
because thats what I prefer
©2006-2009 ~ItsAllInMyHead99
:iconitsallinmyhead99:

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Me and a friend had a conversation about how much aperfect world would suck.

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:iconkiyora-sano:
wow. you've got some amazing talent!! you should be very proud. again, i love the message/story it conveys. great work. i commend you once more. :handshake:

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"I'm a peripheral visionary - I can see into the future but just way off to the side." ~steven wright

:dygel: We that are true lovers run into strange capers. as you like it :dygel:
:iconjay--x:
Whoa, wicked compostition. The flows right and the message it conveys is a thought provoking one, which, as always=p, is a good thing. The writing on this is spectacular, and just... damn! :) Great job babe, and I must agree - a perfect world wouldnt be so perfect IMO.

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"Oh, Jake," Brett said, "we could have had such a damned good time together"
Ahead was a mounted policeman in khaki directing traffic. He raised his baton. The car slowed suddenly pressing Brett against me.
"Yes." I said. "Isn't it pretty to think so?"
:iconkurea--chan:
wow thats awsome! Nice flow

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A whole webpage devoted to my brand new saga! ... that is my whole DA account is devoted to my saga too but you get to hear less from me and more of my story
:iconcinderellds:
wow - very thought-provoking; flows beautifully, rhyme works seamlessly (which is sometimes hard to achieve, as i well know). the message really makes me think; great job!

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You leave a hole everywhere you don't go.
:iconstrangeyoshi:
pretty much what cinderellds said. ^_^

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Finish him!

:dead: :chainsaw:
:iconneverness:
Lucifer?

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Edizkan Adil Ata
:iconmistyvision:
very deep, and it really makes u think, lovely

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